Invisible Me

They have eyes to see, but somehow, they don't see me
They say they love me, and how important I am to the
family.
I feel so alone' I can hardly  breathe, I guess that's the
problem I wear my feelings on my sleeves.
They pass me by, going here, going there, but they never
speak so I guess I'm nowhere.
Invisibility should be my middle name, but terrible breaks
is my claim to fame.
I've always wondered, when will my turn come, to shine
to thrive, to be number one,
In the lives of my loved ones, those who care so deep'
who has let me down to the point of no sleep.
tossing and turning like a merry-go-round, I'm invisible
you see, so I can't make a sound.
I pretend not to be, not to know, not to see, how they
bend me, and break me, like a branch on a tree,
That tumbles in the wind on a stormy day, being tossed
about struggling, to find my way.
Someday they'll wonder whatever became of she, that
shadow of a person whose name was me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Christian Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 5:16 AM
thanks for all your feed back om poetry, your poems are great too, i look forward to reading more, in many poes it speaks to us in many ways, i can relate your words. God bless from diane
Christian Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 4:03 AM
aww whata great poem, I used to feel invisible when i was a child, so i know theese feelings very well, but you will neevr be invisibal to God, sometimes others find it hard how to appriciate us, we so bussy with the housework keeping thnks on top as the saying goes a womans work never does stop, its hard sometimes for others to show emotion but i am sure they care deep down. you are and always will be someone special to God he has a purpose for you, you are and always will be his special child.
Key Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 1:33 PM
I love it, love it, love it. It reads like my own life. jojoseven
Goff Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 11:36 AM
emotional poem, Betty, nice! Jim
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