Invisible

Invisible imagining appears sliding down a single tear friends draw near

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Russell Sivey

Date: 9/2/2017 5:36:00 AM

I love this modern format haiku! You have delighted me with your incredible skill at writing this wondrous poem my friend! I certainly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning, you have amazed me by your stupendous writing! Great Work!!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 6:59:00 AM

Russell how are you this am. I see Emma lost her job as secretary supreme. Hi Emma! Russell you are so kind in your commenting on my work I feel just thank you is not enough. I will have to think about it and come up with something stupendous. Patricia

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/2/2017 3:35:00 AM

Hi Patricia , you have blown me away with this wonderful write , 'sliding down a single tear ' beautiful ::)))hugs

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/2/2017 7:15:00 AM

;;))))

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 6:54:00 AM

Niall next time I will tie you down so you won't blow.lol.lol Thanks for your encouragement.

White Wolf

Date: 9/2/2017 2:53:00 AM

I once got told that a haiku shouldn't rhyme! But I think it's absolutely great!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 6:49:00 AM

I guess you can call it a Patticoo. Rules are: short and sweet, relax and write, connect with the heart.lol It seemed correct for the feeling it engendered. Thank you for visiting and your comment. You are right.

Pipping Stars

Date: 9/1/2017 11:11:00 PM

you are poetry here ...

Pipping Stars
Date: 9/2/2017 6:45:00 AM

wink ...

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 6:43:00 AM

Good morning Timothy and thank you for your comment. Have a wonderful day!