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Invisible

Invisible 

imagining appears
sliding down a single tear
friends draw near

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Russell Sivey

September 2, 2017 at 5:36 AM

I love this modern format haiku! You have delighted me with your incredible skill at writing this wondrous poem my friend! I certainly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning, you have amazed me by your stupendous writing! Great Work!!

Patricia Cresswell

September 2, 2017 at 6:59 AM

Russell how are you this am. I see Emma lost her job as secretary supreme. Hi Emma! Russell you are so kind in your commenting on my work I feel just thank you is not enough. I will have to think about it and come up with something stupendous. Patricia

White Wolf

September 2, 2017 at 2:53 AM

I once got told that a haiku shouldn't rhyme! But I think it's absolutely great!

Patricia Cresswell

September 2, 2017 at 6:49 AM

I guess you can call it a Patticoo. Rules are: short and sweet, relax and write, connect with the heart.lol It seemed correct for the feeling it engendered. Thank you for visiting and your comment. You are right.