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Invisible

At your sight I was, I listened, I watched, In silence, But, You didn’t notice my presence, Invisible to you I was, Thus, I transformed, I talked, You saw me, I clattered, And so, I became, woman.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/9/2011 12:54:00 PM
maybe he should have listened better! I'm sure you're a great woman. Light & Love
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Date: 3/3/2010 4:56:00 AM
Just read all your poems, I think they are great...so much feeling can be felt through your words...Thanks and look forward to reading more...Allie
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Date: 2/24/2010 4:06:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Welcome to soup hope that you stay is pleasant and you enjoy reading and writing many poems. Sara
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