Invisible

If you're standing and nobody sees
If nobody hears you do you cease to be
 
How much of yourself will you lose to this game
Without holding the participants in deep disdain
 
How long will you cry and nobody listen
Your eyes seem almost forever to misten
 
Surely it's not supposed to feel like this
Something in becoming an adult that you must've missed
 
Be "nice" speak pleasant and all will adore
NO
It just means your needs are easier to ignore
 
You're worth more than this speak out loud find your voice
To suffer in quiet is a personal choice
 
Wanting so badly to walk and stand proud
To live to the fullest and live it out loud
 
You've forgotten who you are, forgotten where you've been
But remember God sees the pain that you're in
 
This lesson is far too important to miss
Study it carefully your feelings you should never dismiss
 
Stop walking on eggshells and learn how to yell
And maybe the next time the story will be different that you tell

January 2009
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Yates Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 11:16 PM
Beautiful, I love the line "To suffer in quiet is a personal choice" I 100% agree. You should live life to its fullest great write!
Rhinem Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 6:33 PM
Smile~Very loved filled, compassionate and caring dear!:)~"Hello Precious, Gifted and Beautiful Laurie Ginn!!!":):)~Did I ever tell You, how much I truly love "Your" name?! And did I ever tell You, how much I miss "Your" comments!!!:):)~I deeply and sincerely, hope that life is treating "You" beautifully!? Another Perfect Poem Here Laurie!:)~"My Love Forever To 'You & Those You Love,' Always, John!!!"~Beautiful Dreams Dear Lady~Bye!:):)
Mccall Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 8:08 AM
your not invisible any more as you write with pen and pad
P. Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 3:34 AM
the irony of it all!! beautiful couplet!! loved the rhymes!! by the way my name is ARANY!
Higgins Avatar
January 29, 2009 at 9:34 AM
Laurie that is a rocking comment. Thanks for always taking the time to read my work. Its greatly apprecaited.
Higgins Avatar
January 27, 2009 at 5:19 PM
Thank you for the comments on both my poems today Laurie. Hope you are well my friend.
Kelly Avatar
January 26, 2009 at 4:40 AM
Great piece , Laurie , well rhymed .... Guy goes into his doctor ; Doc !! Doc , you must help me PLEEEEEASE !!! , I am desperate , as everybody keeps ignoring me .. ( sob , sob) It's , as if I am invisible .... Doc ; " Next please " ..... You write onnnnnn ...
Guzzi Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 5:08 PM
misten' (' missing letter g) en'/ing is phonetic dialect and very nice, interesting, colorful. "Something about becoming adult, I've missed?" "Speak pleasant, be "nice" and all will adore, NO!" "Your worth more! Speak out! Find your voice!" "To suffer in silence is your personal choice." "Don't forget who you are. Don't forget where you've been!" "Just remember God seea all the painyou are in." "Study it carefully no feeling dismissed" "And maybe next time a different story you'll tell."
Williams Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Hi Laurie.. Truth and Irony, so often hand in hand... thought provoking and clever writing Laurie. Thank you so much for your comment on Spare Car Keys... all in the past now, but still sad.
Ingle Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 10:28 PM
I'm glad you didn't end that one with run like hell, I was already on my tip toes honey and I'd forgotten my tenner shoes. I love it..I even named my little yellow truck Ol' Yeller..smilessss. Girl this nut has gotta get to bed..I might have to go work on some race horses tomorrow. Take care sweetie pie...Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
 Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 8:42 PM
Stand proud yet not hauty but with humility. God made you for a unique purpose. This is a thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it. Blessings to you. Karen
Ehigiator Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 5:11 PM
Lovely write...I loved this, it's going in my favorites..Tyesha
Ehigiator Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 5:10 PM
Beautifully written, with so much inspiration and directness.. In life you can only take so much..You take and take until you suddenly blow up.I have learned that it is always better to tell someone how you feel, regardless of how they react, you will see that they will respect you more.They will know you are not a push over and that you are somebody..I started yelling years ago and been yelling ever since..I only wish I had the courage before then to stand up for myself..True message* GB Tyesha
Higgins Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 8:08 AM
Laurie thanks for commenting on my work this morning and the thing I most admire about you is how you read each and every line..its very evident in your comments. Hope you are well. Thanks.
Pordlaw Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 3:04 AM
You my lady have spoken my heart... This was a read as if taken an imprint from mine own mind and placing it to the wind for all to hear... Bravo, Bravo *Standing Ovation* E
Foulk Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 1:38 PM
a very lovely and heartwarming piece of poetry and a beautiful message. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.
Gass Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Right on sister. Love your words. Not only is this beautifully written it is filled with truth and the beauty of your heart. Everyone deserve to be heard and counted. It is terrible to have to live walking on eggshells, I know! Excellent write here, Laurie. Loveudo too! Love, Robin
Montgomery Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Great poem :) I'm invisible sometimes too
Winter Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 5:54 AM
Beautiful couplet Laurie. Emotional. Keep the faith. Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 4:33 AM
I love your style of writing Laurie. So much emotions comes through your words. The message in the piece is wonderful. I know God sees and I need to keep that in my heart. Great!
Moreno Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 4:00 AM
Nice couplet Laurie...Raul
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