Invisibility of Hope

"Believe in the releasing of pain, 
             hoping that fond memories remain"


I n v i s i b l e  to the human eye,
          threshold to forgiveness- learn to fly;
foggy isolation filled with scorn-
indelible through sullen nightfall,
          forlorn, worn and torn;
with a broken heart too weak to bawl;
I crawl...(path to a dream once captured)-
                    hope resides within the  e n r a p t u r e d.





syllable count: 9-9-9-9-5-9-9-9
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September 2, 2019
Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Lines
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La France Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 11:25 AM
Lu congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent Rhyme poem and I love the quote too
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 12:56 PM
- L.L., congratulations on your beautiful winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 5:00 PM
You did everything perfectly, even having that lovely quote. Congrats, Lu Loo
May Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Wonderful write Lu Loo..Congrats on your win..
Chiri Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Love it! Congrats on your win!;)
Green Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Beautifully done. There is always a wonderful creativity to your work. It is quite unique which just shows the scope of your talent
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