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Invisibility of Hope

    "Believe in the releasing of pain, 
             hoping that fond memories remain"

I n v i s i b l e  to the human eye,
          threshold to forgiveness- learn to fly;
foggy isolation filled with scorn-
indelible through sullen nightfall,
          forlorn, worn and torn;
with a broken heart too weak to bawl;
I crawl...(path to a dream once captured)-
                    hope resides within the  e n r a p t u r e d.

syllable count: 9-9-9-9-5-9-9-9

September 2, 2019
Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Lines
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/16/2019 11:25:00 AM
Lu congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent Rhyme poem and I love the quote too
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:56:00 PM
- L.L., congratulations on your beautiful winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2019 5:00:00 PM
You did everything perfectly, even having that lovely quote. Congrats, Lu Loo
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Date: 9/10/2019 2:24:00 PM
Wonderful write Lu Loo..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 9/10/2019 12:15:00 PM
Love it! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 9/2/2019 11:46:00 AM
Beautifully done. There is always a wonderful creativity to your work. It is quite unique which just shows the scope of your talent
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