Invincible Dreams:Collaboration With Darren White:

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As I incorporate colours with images in my dreams, Still, it’s more the emotional attachments that set the scenes. Like an onlooker in another world of landscapes, I am in control as I pull back the invisible drapes. My mind wanders from my body so light, And flies off with birds into hot summer nights. I choose the scenes I want to participate in, I choose who will tonight be my friend or kin. Why just last night I was challenged in combat, Defending in Kung Fu but I never attack. Until of course they make the first move, But in dreams, it is easy never to lose. I'm a whirling dervish, dancing on my toes, Not fighting, but awing my friends and foes. While moving my mind wanders far away, I dance out of me, leave only my body to stay. I will often find myself in strange situations, Sometimes a dream will turn in various stipulations.

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Date: 2/10/2017 1:55:00 AM
I dig this topic. I want more!! Have you ever negotiated the stipulations of your dream and where it will lead with a cashier who only has change for a 2 dollar bill? ... Love this post, guys. -- Wesley C.
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Date: 2/10/2017 2:51:00 AM
Hahaha, No, I haven't! You're a rip-snorter, Wesley! /|\
Date: 1/31/2017 5:58:00 PM
An amazing poem that you guys wrote - I love your collaborations, you write greatly together... <3
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White Wolf
Date: 1/31/2017 6:13:00 PM
I enjoy working with Duir! He is so prolific and easy to write with. Thank you again /|\
Date: 1/31/2017 1:13:00 PM
awesome team-up... choose your battles and choose love as well, WW and darren...huggs
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Date: 1/31/2017 10:16:00 AM
Well done guys!!! I love the inclusion of "a whirling dervish"!! ;) Dream on!! Big Hugggs!! Deb
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Date: 1/31/2017 7:36:00 AM
What well difined dreams! A seven to both of you dear, White Wolf!
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White Wolf
Date: 1/31/2017 7:36:00 AM
You are too kind my friend /|\
Date: 1/31/2017 7:24:00 AM
Really cool bot of you. Yep, in dreams we can always be the victor, if that is what we choose. Nicely expressed in this wonderful collaboration of two fine poets.
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White Wolf
Date: 1/31/2017 7:37:00 AM
Thanks heaps, Chris /|\
Date: 1/31/2017 4:55:00 AM
- A beautiful co-write from you two ... continue dancing on your toes :) - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2017 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, we will /|\
Date: 1/31/2017 4:55:00 AM
I love this poem very much, Budgie :)
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White Wolf
Date: 1/31/2017 4:58:00 AM
It's a pleasure writing with you, Duir! /|\
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