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Invincible Dreams:Collaboration With Darren White:

As I incorporate colours with images in my dreams, Still, it’s more the emotional attachments that set the scenes. Like an onlooker in another world of landscapes, I am in control as I pull back the invisible drapes. My mind wanders from my body so light, And flies off with birds into hot summer nights. I choose the scenes I want to participate in, I choose who will tonight be my friend or kin. Why just last night I was challenged in combat, Defending in Kung Fu but I never attack. Until of course they make the first move, But in dreams, it is easy never to lose. I'm a whirling dervish, dancing on my toes, Not fighting, but awing my friends and foes. While moving my mind wanders far away, I dance out of me, leave only my body to stay. I will often find myself in strange situations, Sometimes a dream will turn in various stipulations.
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Cadet Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 1:55 AM
I dig this topic. I want more!! Have you ever negotiated the stipulations of your dream and where it will lead with a cashier who only has change for a 2 dollar bill? ... Love this post, guys. -- Wesley C.
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 2:51 AM
Hahaha, No, I haven't! You're a rip-snorter, Wesley! /|\
Polydoro Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 5:58 PM
An amazing poem that you guys wrote - I love your collaborations, you write greatly together... <3
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 6:13 PM
I enjoy working with Duir! He is so prolific and easy to write with. Thank you again /|\
Onclaud Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 1:13 PM
awesome team-up... choose your battles and choose love as well, WW and darren...huggs
Burch Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:16 AM
Well done guys!!! I love the inclusion of "a whirling dervish"!! ;) Dream on!! Big Hugggs!! Deb
Trifiatis Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:36 AM
What well difined dreams! A seven to both of you dear, White Wolf!
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:36 AM
You are too kind my friend /|\
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Really cool bot of you. Yep, in dreams we can always be the victor, if that is what we choose. Nicely expressed in this wonderful collaboration of two fine poets.
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Thanks heaps, Chris /|\
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 4:55 AM
- A beautiful co-write from you two ... continue dancing on your toes :) - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 4:59 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, we will /|\
White Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 4:55 AM
I love this poem very much, Budgie :)
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 4:58 AM
It's a pleasure writing with you, Duir! /|\
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