Inverted

The trembling thumb of threatening thunder
Strikes silvery shimmering of silken sludge
And adjoins an arch on alter of an afforest.
It inverts insipid immobility of irrationality.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gani Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 12:01 PM
I see that your alliteration is better than me. thanks. :)
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 4:56 AM
indeed does dang duly, fresh foment for figurin' flatulent flowers, great goin'! god's graces giv'n good. nice alliteration, too. Beauty day~N
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