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Inverted

The trembling thumb of threatening thunder Strikes silvery shimmering of silken sludge And adjoins an arch on alter of an afforest. It inverts insipid immobility of irrationality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/15/2011 12:01:00 PM
I see that your alliteration is better than me. thanks. :)
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Date: 10/15/2011 4:56:00 AM
indeed does dang duly, fresh foment for figurin' flatulent flowers, great goin'! god's graces giv'n good. nice alliteration, too. Beauty day~N
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