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poem to published at Story Circle Network, Real Women Write, March 2026.

INVENTORY OF A MIDNIGHT MIND

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What was I thinking? The receipts pile up in the dark~ a grocery list of half-baked epiphanies, a parking ticket from the heart. I folded my courage into origami cranes, but they flew off with someone else’s wind. The leftovers in my mental fridge have grown fur and begun to sin. The clock ticks in a language I used to understand~ now it just spells my name in Morse code, hand over hand. What was I thinking? The answer’s in the attic, wearing my old jeans, laughing at static.
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Gauthier Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 5:41 AM
fun juxtapositions ~ clever wordplay
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 4:07 PM
thanks for noticing and for commenting
Hind Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 7:38 PM
Interesting...truly enjoyed. The rhyme worked very well.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 5:20 PM
thanks, Paige. Glad you enjoyed the words, hugs
Lawless Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 5:39 AM
I can hear Mr. Poe chuckling in the background. An introduction to New Year's angst in verse. It has been said "the unexamined life is not worth living" ... I believe that applies to poetry also. this poem is tragic, humorous, uplifting and deflating, each line a refracted shadow of a life's fractured mirror. A definite FAVE.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 5:20 PM
wow, John! Your comments about my poem are wise and insightful. I'm grateful for your poetic nature and observations. Humbly grateful for your fave...means so much to me
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