Invented My Own Planet

invented my own planet 
when I was a girl of nine
created it out of the banks 
of my favorite things

constructed of thoughts and ideals
character traits needed on all planets
powered by enthusiasm and love
I began hovering over the backyard at age twelve

My darling parents and siblings
in awe of my stealth and powerful
Ingenuity apparent,
full tilt receptivity 
They knew they could join me
However, not wanting to stifle me, they wisely did not.

While much of this world is watching TV
I am watching this world.
Catbird seat vision
safely out of harms way
reachable but independent
loving my life!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Michael Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 10:09 AM
What a blessing you've had...a comforting write...
Krutsinger Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:23 AM
Thank you Arturo. I truly had fun writing this one. I have this little motto. If it is not fun, I do not write it. Ha!
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