Invasive

life had become a flat line

a once wonderful rhythm 

ceased to pulsate 

not even palpitations


pressure had won over

struggling on

depression self-harm

cognitive dysfunction


one final cut

then he touched her heart

excised rotten valves

replaced them with joy


bypassed clots of despair

offered new lease of love

sleeping beauty woke up

from deep slumber


when the surgeon

closed the wounds 

she bore her scars with

gratitude and pride


10th September 2021

Contest: The One Who Touched My Heart

Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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