V. Deepa Poet Free verse

Intuitions Truimphed At First Meet

Firstly to say ,
I had spun a person similar to you in my dreams.
Secondly, 
I was longing for your presence in real.
Initially,
We started mingling to discover-
explored talents, appreciate, understand each other.
But, 
when I actually met you..
I didn't expect myself to stumble like that:
My eyes drew designs while you looked at me
My heart was whistling while you spoke to me
My pulse was dancing while you appreciated me
My whole body was singing when you were in 
front of me.
And gradually, as time rolled on..
My soul accepted you as it's mate forever !!

27-6-2020

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Caren Krutsinger July 3, 2020 at 5:51 AM To me this is a sensual write! The heart loves who the heart loves, and recognition is a gorgeous and beautiful thing. V. Deepa July 3, 2020 at 12:59 PM Hello mam, Thanks a lot for the lovely words of appreciation.I am glad you liked this poem.:-) Have a wonderful day.~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu June 27, 2020 at 1:01 PM Hello Deepa, this is so romantic. Good luck in the contest. love Darlene.Enjo your day my friend. V. Deepa June 28, 2020 at 1:44 AM Hello mam, Thankyou very much for the wishes.:-) Enjoy your day too.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 27, 2020 at 7:44 AM A breakdown of love at first sight! I have experienced that ;), Great write! Good luck in the contest, xomo! V. Deepa June 28, 2020 at 1:42 AM Oh wow, First whiff,pheromones...I can understand now mam. you checked at smile first;-) I guess he was lucky guy;-) Lol,not as eloquent as me?! :-P Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 27, 2020 at 1:07 PM The best I could describe it is love at first whiff, pheromones... I remember my first thought was "who is that smile?", see, not as eloquent as you ;). V. Deepa June 27, 2020 at 11:20 AM Hello Mo mam, Thankyou for your appreciation and encouragement:-) I wonder how you experienced a breakdown! Best wishes for you too.Keep writing and keep inspiring:-) Take care.With love~Deepa:-)