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Intuitions Truimphed At First Meet

Firstly to say , I had spun a person similar to you in my dreams. Secondly, I was longing for your presence in real. Initially, We started mingling to discover- explored talents, appreciate, understand each other. But, when I actually met you.. I didn't expect myself to stumble like that: My eyes drew designs while you looked at me My heart was whistling while you spoke to me My pulse was dancing while you appreciated me My whole body was singing when you were in front of me. And gradually, as time rolled on.. My soul accepted you as it's mate forever !! 27-6-2020 Note:STRAND COMPLETELY NEW POETRY (1) any form any theme Poetry Contest. Sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 5:51:00 AM

To me this is a sensual write! The heart loves who the heart loves, and recognition is a gorgeous and beautiful thing.

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 12:59:00 PM

Hello mam, Thanks a lot for the lovely words of appreciation.I am glad you liked this poem.:-) Have a wonderful day.~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/27/2020 1:01:00 PM

Hello Deepa, this is so romantic. Good luck in the contest. love Darlene.Enjo your day my friend.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/28/2020 1:44:00 AM

Hello mam, Thankyou very much for the wishes.:-) Enjoy your day too.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/27/2020 7:44:00 AM

A breakdown of love at first sight! I have experienced that ;), Great write! Good luck in the contest, xomo!

V. Deepa
Date: 6/28/2020 1:42:00 AM

Oh wow, First whiff,pheromones...I can understand now mam. you checked at smile first;-) I guess he was lucky guy;-) Lol,not as eloquent as me?! :-P

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/27/2020 1:07:00 PM

The best I could describe it is love at first whiff, pheromones... I remember my first thought was "who is that smile?", see, not as eloquent as you ;).

V. Deepa
Date: 6/27/2020 11:20:00 AM

Hello Mo mam, Thankyou for your appreciation and encouragement:-) I wonder how you experienced a breakdown! Best wishes for you too.Keep writing and keep inspiring:-) Take care.With love~Deepa:-)