Notes About The Poem

poem written based upon this image-for online poetry class

INTUITION

A small warmth
rises beneath thought~
a single beam
finding its way
through mist.

A leaf shifts.
No wind.
Only the air
leaning.

You step.
The path
brightens
by one shade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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July 18, 2026 at 3:53 PM
Well-written piece here, Sara. I like your interpretation of the image.
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