Silent One Poet Rhyme

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Dedicated to a dear friend, who is an introvert, but his eyes are very much extroverted, which shows in this photography and film making..

Too much love will kill you
If you can't make up your mind
Torn between the lover
And the love you leave behind
You're headed for disaster
'Cause you never read the signs
Too much love will kill you - every time

 

Freddie Mercury - Queen

Introvert Wings

Extrovert eyes express cimmerian connotations,
hidden within silent chambers of an introvert mind.
Thoughts twist and turn, but disguise frustrations,
as a melancholic heart struggles to remain kind.

Drained by energies from those who fail to understand,
soul seeks solitude to energise back into life,
Searching for a comfort zone in the promised land,
before insanity cuts deeper than a poisoned knife.

Confined to dogmatic chains results in confusion,
as faith becomes an enemy within critical cultures.
Torn between paradise and social seclusion,
soul seeks solitude from vociferous vultures.

Complicated compromises mean hearts will be broken,
yet introvert wings yearn to be free so they can soar.
Life is a balance of words voiced and left unspoken,
if only it was as simple as walking through that door.

The Silent One
Simple Musings
18 July 2018

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Michael Whatley September 5, 2019 at 9:28 AM An excellent expression of the fragility and complexity of our psyche, Silent!

Vladislav Raven November 18, 2018 at 12:19 PM Hi Silent, I can relate to much in this poem being an introvert. It seems, only through poetry that my heart can sing and I can relate to people. I always love the emotion and the words that flow through your work. Once within a piece you just want to stay within the thought. Such a wonderful write for your friend Silent. A fave. have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Francis J Grasso September 3, 2018 at 6:48 AM I walk that path. How perfectly, beautifully expressed. ...Fran

Vegter Papyrus August 19, 2018 at 9:13 AM I loved every word! Thanks for the support!

Besma Riabi Dziri August 5, 2018 at 8:19 AM " a melancholic heart struggles to remain kind" ! Indeed, those whose hearts and souls are open to life and people complexities and aches are great souls, tolerant, understanding, forgiving and "remain kind".. but the problem is that others "fail to understand".. A great and brilliant write Silent One! A very deep poem that touches the very core of Humanity.. A great poem that depicts the dilemma of knowledgeable minds and beautiful souls. A FAV. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed Silent One.

Abosede Ogundare July 31, 2018 at 6:15 AM This is a master piece , friend. It's always nice reading your piece.

Anisha Dutta July 29, 2018 at 1:11 PM Another powerful poem by a Truly Talented Poet. Last stanza is unique. Blessing.

Joanna Daniel July 28, 2018 at 1:11 AM Deep and lovely writing, SO:) great photos by your friend too:)

Leon Enriquez July 25, 2018 at 7:31 PM Dear Silent One: In the stillness, I hear you voice profound. Lovely write here. Bravo! All the best then, Leon.

M. L. Kiser July 23, 2018 at 6:46 PM Ah, if only... Your friend's photography is powerful! As is your poem, which makes me a little sad; I've been a Freddie Mercury fan for years. Nevertheless, well penned.

Chuck Melugin July 23, 2018 at 1:00 PM Silent.....You bathe your words in brilliance as they cut and heal!

Nette Onclaud July 23, 2018 at 12:20 PM this speaks to all as we are both hermits and gypsies, except that circumstances compel us to choose which costume to wear... here is where the authenticity of self comes in, S.O... deep read and how!...huggs

Aqua Marine July 22, 2018 at 4:14 PM Incisively insightful...humane and compassionate understanding in this expressive write- he is blessed to have you as a friend, SO!

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2018 at 7:47 PM very nice, Silent One. I liked reading about the friend having "extroverted eyes" So interesting!

Arturo Michael July 20, 2018 at 5:24 PM Nice write SO...You can run but you can't hide... I am the words you wrote...All the best my friend

Connie Marcum Wong July 20, 2018 at 4:40 PM An original look at a perplexing dilemma Silent. Brilliantly written! Your last two lines ring in my ears. Beautiful! : )

Emile Pinet July 20, 2018 at 11:54 AM This is raw and painful to read ... that is why it's good... and will do more to help introverts than pages of useless pretty words spoken to mask the truth...instead of lifting off the bandage and taking a good look at the scab concealed with platitudes and niceties. Emile. Silent One July 20, 2018 at 4:13 PM You make a valid point Emile, but it is something that has to be tackled in a sensitive manner... Thanks for the visit and comment..

Freddie Robinson Jr. July 20, 2018 at 11:22 AM Depth of thought, simplicity of understanding ... very deep poem, SO. Great lines thru out: Life is a balance of words voiced and left unspoken ... Illuminating poetry inked in golden compassionate earth tones. Love and best wishes always. Silent One July 20, 2018 at 4:13 PM Thank you Freddie... Glad that line resonated with you..

Mike Gentile July 20, 2018 at 9:47 AM Sensitivity to and understanding of human uniqueness is also a talent unto itself.. and an important one which you undoubtedly possess, Silent One. Excellent tribute!! Silent One July 20, 2018 at 4:14 PM You are too kind Mike.. I try, but I am far from perfect.. Thanks for feedback..

James Marshall Goff July 20, 2018 at 9:43 AM Wow! Intense...so easy to relate to dilemma of emotional attachment...wonderful poem! I watched Freddie & Queen from stage left risers in Minneapolis 1977...best concert I ever saw...then The Who & Lyrnyrd Skyryrd same year! Silent One July 20, 2018 at 4:15 PM Thank you James, Freddie was awesome.. Can't wait for the movie that is coming out in November..

Brandy Nicole July 19, 2018 at 10:49 PM "introvert wings yearn to be free so they can soar" For some reason this thought truly tugs at my heart. In life, not all moments are simple. Everyone is different. The wind will open up their wings, when the time is right. They will soar. ~ Brandy Silent One July 20, 2018 at 8:39 AM You are right everyone is different, and it is about learning to adapt to people who are and respect them and their wishes... Thanks for the visit..

Carole Duet July 19, 2018 at 9:37 PM Oh ZZ...your depth of understanding is so astounding and this poem proves it once again. FAVED of course...... Silent One July 20, 2018 at 8:40 AM Thank you Carole.. When you meet different people, it helps you to understand them and adapt to them also..

Robert Lindley July 19, 2018 at 4:53 PM A truly brilliant and enlightening composition my friend! Yes, we all are very complex creatures that have inner sight and thoughts that would amaze this world if only we dare share such... A fav, this is truly a gem my friend! Silent One July 20, 2018 at 8:45 AM Thank you Robert.. You are right we are all complex, and it is hard sometimes when others do not understand our ways.. people seem to be afraid of those who are different..

Harry Horsman July 19, 2018 at 3:38 PM Love your poem of two worlds within one body. How the words ring out, the complexity of a war of two opposing entities. Silent One July 20, 2018 at 8:48 AM Yes, rarely do you see extroverts and introverts in the same room.... Usually the introvert leaves to let the extrovert enjoy the attention.. Thanks for the visit Harry..

Maria Williams July 19, 2018 at 12:08 AM A talented poem written for a talented friend Si. One must have to go 'inwards to go outwards' to step out of the chains of the comfort zone, that only exists in one's own mind. Fear of rejection from negative individuals and one's own hesitation because of the time old 'what will people say' Thoroughly enjoyed your write, very meaningful and I do hope your friend really appreciates it. and a FAVE from me....Maria ~ hugs Silent One July 19, 2018 at 5:58 AM Thank you Maria, he is very talented, even more for an introvert... Life can be difficult when we live to other people's expectations, especially when it is loved ones, who do not understand our needs to be who we want to be... Sometimes walking away is not so simple.. especially for an introvert bird...

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