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Introspective Indecisiveness

Introspective indecisiveness Ignoring ideal intricacies Intelligent indigents ignoring ideas in idleness Sage sensuous silliness Soaring significantly succinctly, sassily Sashaying sensitively scoring sensibilities savagely Words winging wildly Wildflowers writing winged words.

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/1/2019 1:32:00 AM

Wonderful last line, Caren!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/1/2019 5:38:00 AM

I hate to admit this, but I LOVED that line James, so thank you!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/31/2019 11:08:00 PM

I would never have attempted a word-painting such as this with alliteration; well done!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/1/2019 9:03:00 PM

You throw words very nicely.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/1/2019 5:38:00 AM

hahahahahahaahahaha M.L. here is my secret. I never thought of it at all. Just threw it onto the page.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/31/2019 10:47:00 PM

Alluring alarming albugineous, albunotic ** alliteration, wildly winging its way westward willy-nilly Willy-Wonka. :) ** supposedly, these are real worlds. (Perhaps they are more Sir Eel than real, however). :) :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/1/2019 5:39:00 AM

This my one of the many worlds I have raging inside my head. It's weird but I can live on more than one at a time.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/31/2019 9:44:00 PM

I see; observe me, the inner inn; what I see I can't believe, truth but dazzling maze….!/// its great alliteration poem

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/1/2019 5:39:00 AM

Thank you Mahtab. I do love to challenge myself every once in a little bit of a while...