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Introspecting myself in the mirrors reflection of Never-ending constricting struggle from sunrise to the insomnia at night The dawn arise and it is still continuing in the silence of the day Remembering who I am, a caring woman full of life Often not knowing where I am, I am here in a universe full of Struggles try to figure how did I get here? A Puzzle piece that hasn’t yet found its place in my life. Educated, but feel childlike an inadequate or just a shadow of what I wish to be Capricious to what I want to do NOW! In which I should be patient Time will tell in constructing a narrative out of random events. Is it all about how human beings react , a believer or misanthropist? Observing myself in life and open my heart to hope Not allowing anything to stop me in the goals of my life 6/26/2016

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Date: 7/6/2016 4:53:00 PM
Congrats on your introspection observing yourself to reacg the goal of life. Hugs
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Date: 6/29/2016 8:10:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2016 11:10:00 AM
Wonderful write Eve. Flows very well.
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Date: 6/29/2016 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win ....
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Date: 6/29/2016 7:36:00 AM
Such a well constructed reflection, and the ending was so uplifting. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/29/2016 3:04:00 AM
Great write:) Congratulations on a superb win, Eve:)
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Date: 6/27/2016 7:43:00 PM
Really enjoyed this! I have to say this line "Puzzle piece that hasn’t yet found its place in my life." really hit the spot with me! :)
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Date: 6/27/2016 3:31:00 PM
Beautifully written, Eve. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/27/2016 10:14:00 AM
Excellent work Eve...great pic to...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/27/2016 5:54:00 AM
May be only a childlike mind can introspect so beautifully ... with the heart towards hope ... so positively ... GL
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Date: 6/26/2016 11:12:00 PM
how emboldened is this remarkable piece, dear eve... you inspire!.. huggs
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Date: 6/26/2016 2:53:00 PM
Eve, this is a wonderful acrostic, it will do very well in the contest lady, good luck :)-luloo
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Date: 6/26/2016 2:48:00 PM
I love the way you have tackled this one Eve good luck in the contest - I found it quite a challenge to write for this contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/26/2016 2:41:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Up against some touch competition..thanks for stopping by.Sara
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