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Introspection

I look within my bag, and baggage more unquenched desires. N erve wrecking mental state, thus illogically surmounts. T he wisdom of sages to simplify life ends in absurd futility. R ather than emptying my burden, I trudge along heavier. O ptimistic spirits flag at half mast with added expectations. S oul's agony increases as all choices seem primordial. P eople and their superimposed views ironically carry more value. E ach breath, thus hisses heavily to keep up that image with fleeting time. C aution is blown asunder with the pleasurable deluge of being constantly affected. T ransparency through our traits help us to know ourselves better for intellectual purity I nner view of our dilemmas and ripping apart our masques is essential to peace. O ur own self awareness has to be critically analysed to realise what is to be valued. N onetheless, self introspection is a beep which debates to create order out of chaos. June 24, 2016 For John Hamilton Introspection-Acrostic

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Date: 7/1/2016 2:12:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/5/2016 6:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara!
Date: 6/29/2016 4:28:00 AM
Congrats Balveen, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/26/2016 10:22:00 AM
a very introspective write indeed, Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/29/2016 2:05:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!

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