Introspection

I  look within my bag, and baggage more unquenched desires.
N erve wrecking mental state, thus illogically surmounts.
T he wisdom of sages to simplify life ends in absurd futility.
R ather than emptying my burden, I trudge along heavier.
O ptimistic spirits flag at half mast with added expectations.
S oul's agony increases as all choices seem primordial.
P eople and their superimposed views ironically carry more value.
E  ach breath, thus hisses heavily to keep up that image with fleeting time.
C aution is blown asunder with the pleasurable deluge of being constantly affected.
T ransparency through our traits help us to know ourselves better for intellectual purity
I nner view of our dilemmas and ripping apart our masques is essential to peace.
O ur own self awareness has to be critically analysed to realise what is to be valued.
N onetheless, self introspection is a beep which debates to create order out of chaos. 

June 24, 2016
For John Hamilton
Introspection-Acrostic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Cheema Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Thank you so much Sara!
Kimathi Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 4:28 AM
Congrats Balveen, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 10:22 AM
a very introspective write indeed, Balveen!
Cheema Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 2:05 PM
Thanks Andrea!
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