Introducing Me

There are people at my school 
slightly different then the others
they are the only ones 
who shine their own colors

They laugh like us
They cry like us
but they never 
create a huge fuss

They are different
they are proud
they are the ones
in their own crowd

I am like them 
so i say
i am different
every day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 16, 2015 at 1:05 AM
kind of weird capitalization going on in the last stanza. the first I is capitalized and the second two are not. the first letters of the first two lines of the second stanza are capitalized, unlike the rest of the poem. aside from that its pretty solid. kind of funny how being like someone else makes you different a la the last stanza. i think this poem could hit a lot harder but im not entirely sure what youre getting at.
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