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He’s a man with attitude that lived within his song provoked an insatiable howlin’ whenever sensually his body moved along, his world once shackled to Rock ‘n’ Roll now just a shuffle of shakin’ bones, this the last time he’ll string his guitar a faithful friend who followed him here near and far. Soon his final hour to holler a rhythmic tune to thousands that bought a ticket he knows he’s battling a sticky wicket, yet with time to reminisce, admits to a sordid life of sin forgot what God had given to him, when over here he claims they were on different sides. His home though is a callin’ across many sunsets so many tides as for the last time his finger slides he cries ‘Oh, Babe I could spend a life time with you But only you know what that would do!’ © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Date: 10/18/2018 5:36:00 PM
great verse ... "sticky wicket" and all. Had been deprived on that metaphor here in Football crazy Virginia. Music - Makers are prophets, too. shalom, shalom
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Date: 7/17/2018 7:01:00 AM
Before my poem reaches an end, This one I want and wish to send, And to inspire you do intend.
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Date: 7/17/2018 4:40:00 AM
An incredible story so well told that captivates the reader early and won't let them go.. I loved it!
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Date: 7/16/2018 11:17:00 PM
So well done, Harry! enjoyed this wonderful lyric!
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:34:00 PM
Profound, a great read, and I thank you again for dropping in and reading my poem Harry, means a lot, Mick
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Date: 7/16/2018 5:38:00 PM
This is incredible, Harry. So much depth. One of your best this whole year. A FAVE
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Date: 7/16/2018 1:54:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your melodic poem..the story in your poem familiar ..and most can relate to..well done, Harry.
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Date: 7/16/2018 12:32:00 PM
Reminiscent of The Last Waltz. Good one Harry...
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Date: 7/16/2018 12:14:00 PM
You present a compelling description of this musician, Harry. A very deep and moving poem. The first part had me thinking of Elvis Presley, but there are so many great talents who have passed - John Lennon and Michael Jackson included. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/16/2018 11:15:00 AM
Very bittersweet! Masterfully wrought my friend it will be a pleasure to read more of your works !
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Date: 7/16/2018 11:11:00 AM
Sometimes you have it all , but time doesn't stop and you're not what you used to be. Well written lyric Harry. Tom
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