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Intricate Love

Thou art the only one that I love, Ever since the day you stole my heart, And when our eyes had its first collide. It is always thee here in my mind. I can't contain presentiment inside of mine, And it feels like I am mesmerized, I’ve lost my mind whenever thy near, And can't deny I feel the chills. So intricate this love must be, Thy heart perhaps beats not for me, I hope my surmise is not that true, 'Coz all I want is thee my love. Love is requisite to live this life, So I want to proffer genuinely it to thee, Thou accept it with great felicity, And thou hold me close to feel thy warm embrace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/20/2016 8:36:00 PM
Edlyn, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Edlyn Villafranca
Date: 3/21/2016 1:01:00 AM
Hi i am really happy reading your comment :) touching :)
Date: 2/17/2016 10:45:00 AM
Definitely, T'is the chills ;).... Awesome poem Edlyn :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:19:00 AM
Hi Edlyn, a lovely poem. A perfect 7. LINDA
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