Intricacy of Light

My inner voice calm, looks for compassion.
   To give encouragement, it comes from within.
I look for honesty as my eyes turn inside-out.
   Always searching to bend nettles and thorns
   into a perspicacious light, intricacy of lace —
intimate in the meaning of life and love.

Gems, like an embryo, form in the dark —
eye-popping wisdom of diamonds and rubies,
sapphires and fiery opals, not endlessly hypnotic
but romantically impactful, not dubiously distracting.

My arms don’t begin at the shoulders but are in the pits
of my inner ken, an amiable passion, like a Winter’s fire
surging powerfully to my hands that draw the waters
of kisses and hugs and the mundane of cleanup
at the end of a day, restart over and over again —
deep deep breaths whisper slowly of strength and vigor,

though the knees ache, the back’s bent but the smiles spark
and the laughs light up like fuel from within. My family draws
from my spirituality, the sense that everything will be alright.

4/23/2020
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
A Poem Honoring Spirituality Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hind Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 7:11 PM
Not surprised that you won something with this. Such breathtaking emotional content, dear Kim <3
Gauthier Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 12:33 AM
Superb imagery, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
Gaul Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Such a powerful and skillful explanation of the complexities of that which guides the spiritual life. Thank you for being so open and sharing. This is wonderful poetry.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Thank you, Greg!
Carber Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Congrats Kim on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Thank you, L.J.!
Watt Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Beautiful thoughts of spirituality, Kim. Light, encouragement, service, confidence, honesty. Well done, congrats on your #1 placement ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Thank you, John!
Romios Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations Kim! So glad you placed first. So well done! Panagiota xx
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 9:51 AM
Thank you! :)
Brul Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 9:48 PM
"though the knees ache, the back’s bent but the smiles spark and the laughs light up like fuel from within." Wow, you have perfectly conveyed a faith that is steadfast amidst everything. A wonderful expression of faith. Best luck.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 4:54 PM
Thanks so much, JCB!
Achilles Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 7:37 AM
Oh so well written, Bless you. Julie
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Thank you, Julie! Blessings!
Ball Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 3:13 PM
Beautifully expressed Kim. Your faith keeps you strong and feeds your spiritual growth. We feed our faith by reading The Word. Great job. Good luck in the conteswt and stay well. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Yes we do! Thanks, Judy!
Roper Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 11:47 AM
I like the second stanza, Kim, good luck in Caren's contest. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx
Trifiatis Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 6:42 AM
The spiritual world hidden within is the only way to heaven. Impressive spiritual writing that shows there is a invaluable treasure resinding into your heart dearest, Kim. Good luck. Hugs xxx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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April 24, 2020 at 5:17 AM
Your poem shows Spirituality. It is beautiful. Thankful for the reminder that God does for me what I can't do for myself. I pray before I do anything. God helps me to show the person who needs this light it in their way. Great job.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 7:28 AM
We serve a good God!
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April 23, 2020 at 9:29 PM
This is so wonderful - I love it and am faving it. Best in the contest and many prayers for your continued inspiration and faith. Thank you for your beautiful treasure. God bless you. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 7:27 AM
Thank you, Regina! <3 Kim
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April 23, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Sooo lovely Kim. I especially love the stanza with the gem references. Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Thank you so much, Sam!
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April 23, 2020 at 8:46 AM
This is exceptional and is worthy of multiple reads. Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so much, Richard!
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