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Intransigence

A lightning-fast swing, a blinding slap and a few seconds later – a dull thunder of the leaving thunderstorm. A numbness of words; a dumbness of feelings; a cold wind from the river; a sad and grievous moan of the coal barges, huddling together. We’ll never huddle together for warmth anymore; we'll never talk to each other as good neighbors over the fence of shared memories. To pop up collar, to turn around and to walk away as fast as a counterfeiter who rushes to get rid of a fake note and flees with change, without looking back. 18.07.2019 Intransigence Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 7/28/2019 6:46:00 PM
How sad that once agreeable can not agree, ending a once valued relationship. I thought you got your message conveyed well. I am sorry to see this entry didn't place Kurt. I really liked it a lot. xxoo
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Date: 7/18/2019 3:25:00 PM
Intense write Kurt...I wanted it to go on (lol) Best wishes for a win! Charlie
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