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You just can't teach an old dog new tricks :) 

Intransigence

As like every other loving child growing up 
In my early years, I have always looked up to my father 
I was over-whelmed by his creativeness...
How he improvised and jury-rigged his make-shift concoctions 
My mother would constantly call him "Mr. MacGyver" 
As the years passed by and the times were changing 
He was still stuck on his old ways 
When my brothers and I were growing our hair long... 
He would still be keeping his slick Navy crew-cuts 
When we would walk around with our scruffy faces 
His face would always be neatly shaved 
When we walked in our wholly jeans 
His attire would always be in a suit and tie 
When we greeted our friends... 
We would say "Hey, what's happening man" 
When he greeted his friends.... 
He would usually say "How are you"
My dad had passed away a decade ago
Still resting on the end table beside his bed 
Is the dial phone he used to call me on 
He was one old dog that you could never teach a new trick to
"Intransigence" 


Intransigence Poetry Contest 
Sponsored By John Hamilton 
7-15-2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Godwin Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 5:50 PM
So you were a fellow hippy? Yippee! I enjoyed this sentimental write and its realistic yet loving look at your Father. In many ways, your write fits my Dad, too. All the best ... CayCay
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:50 AM
LOL...yes, I guess I was and probably still am a Hippy! Your dad seemed to be a stand-up fellow like my dad. Thank you for commenting on this...Poetry hugs // Charlie :)
Adams Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 6:50 AM
enjoyed the glimpse of your past life, nicely penned Charlie :) hugs
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:51 AM
Thank you, Sandra. Sending love & hugs :) ...Charlie
Y. Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Hi Charlie, I really enjoyed your poem about your dad. He sounds like he was a fine man. Guys today can learn a lot from a man like you dad. I wish you the best of luck in contest. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Hi Alexis. Thank you so much for your comments. Yes, the younger generation can learn a lot from the older folks. Funny how only after we get older we realize that hey, the old geezer was right after all (lol) Sending hugs...Charlie :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Enjoyed very much!
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Kim... Hugs Charie
Romios Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Charles, you and I had the same father. I reterred him in Black Sheep and another one. I don't know how he put up with me))? PR
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:59 AM
LOL---Ahh so you were a hard to handle carefree and wild daughter. Just how I picture you (lol) It seems many of us had the same father. Hugs Charlie xx
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 11:18 AM
When you get a chance have a look at my current poem. It was as a result of your contest. It was written before I fully read your rules.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 11:17 AM
I enjoyed this intimate description of your father. He sounds like a stand up guy.
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