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Intoxicating

your single nod as I touch you in that place -- mature thoughts my dream is infused with the smell of white chocolate I open weak eyes -- the small flame wavers as you walk slowly you know I am in your palm even as the fragrant candle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/21/2013 12:29:00 AM
very good. this is the type of tanka that magazine seems to like. With the interesting image of white chocolate and the candle.
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:45:00 AM
Interesting work that is descriptive and expressively written..Sara
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