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Intoxicated Moon

moon river glowing
reflection babbles along
incoherently

© Harry J Horsman  2015

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2015

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February 16, 2016 at 9:28 AM

great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.

October 17, 2015 at 9:35 PM

Love it ,,,,, thanks for coming to read my Careful :)

James Marshall Goff

July 27, 2015 at 7:26 AM

agreed.....you rockin' man! jmg

July 22, 2015 at 12:09 PM

this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!

Suzanne Delaney

July 19, 2015 at 9:55 PM

'A wider than a mile,' Haiku. Love it, Harry...love you. SuZ

July 17, 2015 at 10:37 AM

Extreme beauty feeling from extra ordinary angle. Nicely snapped. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Laura Breidenthal

July 14, 2015 at 4:07 PM

Love it, Harry! Finely written! : ) Always, Laura

July 13, 2015 at 11:50 PM

This haiku delights the reader with both sight and sound... A wonderful take on the drunken moon theme. Nicely penned, Harry!

July 10, 2015 at 3:59 PM

But that babbling is soothing isn't it..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

July 10, 2015 at 12:43 PM

Harry, this is a splendid piece. Well done!

July 8, 2015 at 10:19 AM

A most delightful haiku, Harry! I love the imagery and ' babbles along incoherently' is the cherry on the cake! #7 // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 7, 2015 at 11:16 AM

- A wonderful picture, Harry - Long time no see, it's nice to see you "old friend" !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 5, 2015 at 11:28 PM

oh YES, you did a stunning final line for THIS one. I love when people do a great ending.

July 5, 2015 at 7:17 PM

I found the Moon here to be most full bodied, the water very fluid and the incoherence captivating Harry..

July 5, 2015 at 5:53 PM

beautiful picture you left in my mind a 7 Hugs eve

Eileen Manassian

July 5, 2015 at 9:34 AM

Hello, Harry. Lovely haiku. Loved the babbling incoherently bit. Superb. Hugs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

July 5, 2015 at 4:11 AM

again you are the master xx I will make sure you get a mention in t my interview on the radio radio xx

Ravi Sathasivam

July 5, 2015 at 3:58 AM

Excellent. A perfect haiku. Enjoyed.

July 4, 2015 at 11:16 PM

You summed me up right good there Harry!!! :)

Shadow Hamilton

July 4, 2015 at 6:42 PM

exquisite Harry a perfect haiku hugs 7

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