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Intoxicated Moon

moon river glowing reflection babbles along incoherently © Harry J Horsman 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/16/2016 9:28:00 AM

great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/17/2015 9:35:00 PM

Love it ,,,,, thanks for coming to read my Careful :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/27/2015 7:26:00 AM

agreed.....you rockin' man! jmg

Funom Makama

Date: 7/22/2015 12:09:00 PM

this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/19/2015 9:55:00 PM

'A wider than a mile,' Haiku. Love it, Harry...love you. SuZ

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/17/2015 10:37:00 AM

Extreme beauty feeling from extra ordinary angle. Nicely snapped. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/14/2015 4:07:00 PM

Love it, Harry! Finely written! : ) Always, Laura

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/13/2015 11:50:00 PM

This haiku delights the reader with both sight and sound... A wonderful take on the drunken moon theme. Nicely penned, Harry!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2015 3:59:00 PM

But that babbling is soothing isn't it..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 7/10/2015 12:43:00 PM

Harry, this is a splendid piece. Well done!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 10:19:00 AM

A most delightful haiku, Harry! I love the imagery and ' babbles along incoherently' is the cherry on the cake! #7 // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2015 11:16:00 AM

- A wonderful picture, Harry - Long time no see, it's nice to see you "old friend" !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2015 11:28:00 PM

oh YES, you did a stunning final line for THIS one. I love when people do a great ending.

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/5/2015 7:17:00 PM

I found the Moon here to be most full bodied, the water very fluid and the incoherence captivating Harry..

Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 5:53:00 PM

beautiful picture you left in my mind a 7 Hugs eve

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/5/2015 9:34:00 AM

Hello, Harry. Lovely haiku. Loved the babbling incoherently bit. Superb. Hugs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/5/2015 4:11:00 AM

again you are the master xx I will make sure you get a mention in t my interview on the radio radio xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/5/2015 3:58:00 AM

Excellent. A perfect haiku. Enjoyed.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/4/2015 11:16:00 PM

You summed me up right good there Harry!!! :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/4/2015 6:42:00 PM

exquisite Harry a perfect haiku hugs 7