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Intoxicated Moon 

moon river glowing
reflection babbles along
incoherently

© Harry J Horsman  2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015
riverhaiku

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Funom Makama
Date: 2/16/2016 9:28:00 AM
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great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/17/2015 9:35:00 PM
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Love it ,,,,, thanks for coming to read my Careful :)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/27/2015 7:26:00 AM
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agreed.....you rockin' man! jmg
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2015 12:09:00 PM
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this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/19/2015 9:55:00 PM
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'A wider than a mile,' Haiku. Love it, Harry...love you. SuZ
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/17/2015 10:37:00 AM
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Extreme beauty feeling from extra ordinary angle. Nicely snapped. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/14/2015 4:07:00 PM
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Love it, Harry! Finely written! : ) Always, Laura
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/13/2015 11:50:00 PM
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This haiku delights the reader with both sight and sound... A wonderful take on the drunken moon theme. Nicely penned, Harry!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2015 3:59:00 PM
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But that babbling is soothing isn't it..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 7/10/2015 12:43:00 PM
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Harry, this is a splendid piece. Well done!
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 10:19:00 AM
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A most delightful haiku, Harry! I love the imagery and ' babbles along incoherently' is the cherry on the cake! #7 // paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2015 11:16:00 AM
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- A wonderful picture, Harry - Long time no see, it's nice to see you "old friend" !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/5/2015 11:28:00 PM
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oh YES, you did a stunning final line for THIS one. I love when people do a great ending.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 7/5/2015 7:17:00 PM
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I found the Moon here to be most full bodied, the water very fluid and the incoherence captivating Harry..
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/5/2015 5:53:00 PM
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beautiful picture you left in my mind a 7 Hugs eve
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2015 9:34:00 AM
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Hello, Harry. Lovely haiku. Loved the babbling incoherently bit. Superb. Hugs
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 7/5/2015 4:11:00 AM
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again you are the master xx I will make sure you get a mention in t my interview on the radio radio xx
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/5/2015 3:58:00 AM
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Excellent. A perfect haiku. Enjoyed.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2015 11:16:00 PM
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You summed me up right good there Harry!!! :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/4/2015 6:42:00 PM
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exquisite Harry a perfect haiku hugs 7
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