Intoxicated

Staggering, wobbling, stumbling...somewhere 
Watching the world spinning, and spinning, and spinning 
Confused and discombobulated, he wandered...somewhere 
Swerving his steps and slurring his words... 
Still carrying the Boone's Farm- strawberry flavored 
He mumbled to himself...
Where am I? ...somewhere 
Walking with no direction, he sloppily sings
 
"Somewhere over the rainbow... 
Bluebirds fly 
Somewhere over the rainbow...
Where, oh just where- Am I"
 
His first taste of intoxication 
A sixteen year old want-a-be drinker; drunk 
Vomit all over his overalls, on his clothes, penny-loafers, and in his hair 
The morning aft, mom asks "Where were you last night, son" 
Still intoxicated, he replied- "Somewhere"  

"I" Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Constance La France  
9/9/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rose  Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 9:29 AM
lol very smart answer for a 16 year old, Congrats Charles :)
La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Charlie, awesome and congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this beautifully penned poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Intoxicated" is a creative story/write. So true for so many. A life that needs help but most will not get it. So Sad. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Alex Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 10:15 PM
"Somewhere over the rainbow... Bluebirds fly Somewhere over the rainbow... Where, oh just where- Am I" - Sign of Indoxication. Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
Laurie Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 5:42 PM
Hello Charles ... it amazes me Charles. If a certain food makes us sick, we'll never eat it again but even if the grog nearly kills some, they'll go back to the trough time and time again - thank you Charles - Lindsay
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