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Intoxicated

this drunk man had fun zigzags into the restroom... projectile vomits Submitted for... ''I'' Contest New Or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme: Intoxicated Original title: The Party's Over Date written: 01/19/2021

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Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2021 5:55:00 AM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/15/2021 5:58:00 AM

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/19/2021 2:33:00 PM

My husband has told me stories of his time in the Navy. I guess when young we all have to do some things that we regret later. Just hope we learn from those mistakes. God Bless, JB

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/19/2021 4:53:00 PM

We live and we learn, Judy:-) I was also in the Navy. Thank your hubby for his service on my behalf. Blessings to you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/19/2021 8:02:00 AM

Lol, one to many I think,

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/19/2021 10:05:00 AM

Glad you liked this one, Tom:-)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2021 7:10:00 AM

oh dear how sad, but at least he had fun at the party but now its over :-( hugs jan xx

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/19/2021 10:07:00 AM

Someone hail a cab for the poor fella, lol