Edward Ibeh Poet Senryu

Intoxicated

this drunk man had fun
zigzags into the restroom...
projectile vomits



Submitted for...
 ''I'' Contest New Or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Theme: Intoxicated
Original title: The Party's Over
Date written: 01/19/2021

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Constance La France September 15, 2021 at 5:55 AM Edward, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Edward Ibeh September 15, 2021 at 5:58 AM Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.

Judy Ball January 19, 2021 at 2:33 PM My husband has told me stories of his time in the Navy. I guess when young we all have to do some things that we regret later. Just hope we learn from those mistakes. God Bless, JB Edward Ibeh January 19, 2021 at 4:53 PM We live and we learn, Judy:-) I was also in the Navy. Thank your hubby for his service on my behalf. Blessings to you!

Tom Cunningham January 19, 2021 at 8:02 AM Lol, one to many I think, Edward Ibeh January 19, 2021 at 10:05 AM Glad you liked this one, Tom:-)

Jan Allison January 19, 2021 at 7:10 AM oh dear how sad, but at least he had fun at the party but now its over :-( hugs jan xx Edward Ibeh January 19, 2021 at 10:07 AM Someone hail a cab for the poor fella, lol