Intolerance

Each shoe,
a life He knew,
buds of His olive tree-
next time perhaps,it could be you..
or me !



Inspired by Abe's photos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 10, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Few words...powerful statement ... good luck in Abe's contest.. my entry is Mayhem in May and the photos touched nerves deep inside to think this horror was indeed a reality... good luck Brian..luv.. Linda-Marie
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May 8, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Best wishes for the contest, Brian. A very unique interpretation with a powerful and chilling statement at the end. Best wishes, Carolyn
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May 8, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Nice write Brian... good luck my friend
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