Paul Callus Poet Rhyme

Intolerable

I cannot tolerate the ones with haloed head
Who boast of their achievements, put on an act instead.
I cannot tolerate the perfect, always right
Who claim to love their neighbour omitting black or white.
I cannot tolerate the ones who share your pack
Pretending to be helpful then stab you in the back.
I cannot tolerate the friends who pick your brain
Intent on infiltration determined to make gain.
I cannot tolerate the types who wish you well
They swear to loyal virtue, but then they kiss and tell.
I cannot tolerate the false and double-faced
They are the parasitic, their tongue with poison laced.  
I cannot tolerate the guys who look for fights
They cause much harm while pleading the law to back their rights.
I cannot tolerate the tempters with their faith
They are the instigators, the ones who love to hate.*
They cannot tolerate my face, but I’m alright
My aim is to expose them, oppose with all my might. 


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* Here I am referring to those who commit crimes and injustices in
   the name of religion.
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16th June 2014
Contest: Tolerance
Sponsor Freddie Vee

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Angie Thomas February 12, 2015 at 4:38 AM Wise words Paul... A well penned poem :) Paul Callus February 13, 2015 at 2:03 PM Thank you Angie; glad you found this to your liking. // paul

Timothy Hicks November 3, 2014 at 4:19 PM It looks you let you go of some well guarded righteous rage... dare I say, a dormant volcano about to erupt? ;) You exposed many hypocrisies and double-standards in this write. In a free society we are supposed to tolerate every kind of person... when it reaches pass that boundary into forced acceptance is when you know you're heading towards tyranny. Paul Callus November 4, 2014 at 10:25 AM Hi Timothy! I accept most things in life; I have learnt to live with the opinions of others and to respect their ideas and rights. What I can't stand is extremism, especially where it concerns, racism and religious fundamentalism. I appreciate true friendship and abhor betrayal. Thank you for another interesting visit, my friend. // paul

Robert Lindley September 22, 2014 at 7:49 AM I just now found this gem my friend. Adding this to my fav and with your permission would like to repost this gem at my political forum. I 'll send a pm about that.. Giving this great poem a super 7 rating... Paul Callus September 22, 2014 at 8:20 AM I am so glad you have been touched by this poem, Robert! Thank you...both your comments, rating & fave are much appreciated! Of course...you are free to post it on your forum, my friend. Have a nice week. // paul

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 5:27 PM Watermelon, sounds good :) Paul Callus July 23, 2014 at 6:06 PM Right...sending it by courier, before going to bed (1.06 am over here). Goodnight :) // paul

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 4:28 PM LOL< now for sure, no kettle on the stove :) Paul Callus July 23, 2014 at 5:10 PM You're right...but I do have some lovely sweet cold sliced watermelon in the fridge!:)

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2014 at 3:03 PM ha and I love visiting your poems, and replies..LOL..PD Paul Callus July 18, 2014 at 4:24 PM your welcome visits always catch me unawares....I never even have time to put the kettle on!

Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 8:30 AM I guess this would make you an Intolerant Man. If you have a chance read my poem Tolerant Man and my older poem Tolerance and you will see this is a compliment. This is truly a moving and inspirational piece my friend. Paul Callus July 6, 2014 at 10:42 AM Thank you Richard; I understand what you mean; I will go and pay those posts of yours a visit. // paul

Elaine George June 26, 2014 at 12:29 PM You and I see eye-to-eye on this one, Paul. Much to ponder here. bfn elaine Paul Callus June 26, 2014 at 1:53 PM Thank you Elaine! So glad to have your added support on this topic. take care. // paul

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2014 at 1:14 PM hello Paul, how are you? Once again, I'm back due to your sweet replies... Hope you are having a Blessed day... Linda Paul Callus June 26, 2014 at 1:09 PM Thank you Linda :))

Robert Lindley June 22, 2014 at 8:30 AM My friend that is a truly great, great write!!! BBBBRAVOOOO!!!!! Paul Callus June 22, 2014 at 11:14 AM Thank you Robert! So gad you like it. cu around my friend. // paul

Arthur Vaso June 21, 2014 at 12:06 AM Hi Paul, I came by to read this yet again, simply a great write!!! Paul Callus June 22, 2014 at 4:59 AM I do appreciate it Arthur! Thank you!! // paul

Poet Destroyer A June 20, 2014 at 11:36 PM Ha I love the happy reply on the bottom Paul, I have not been able to read any new poems.... LOL, you should see my notification yahoo mail box. it's going crazy. I try not to abandon these replies. But, i got to admit, some take from me. Not you, I love hearing from you always. Sorry if I only have time, for replies, and contest :(..Sometime this year I will make it up to everyone... :) Linda Paul Callus June 22, 2014 at 4:52 AM Hi Linda.....I love your visits, but can't be greedy; I know how busy you are. I appreciate the effort :)) paul

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2014 at 11:08 PM AWESOME poem. Wish I had written it for that contest of Freddie's. I did not think of anything but sure wish I had thought up one like THIS. Big congrats. I wholeheartedly agree with you on your footnote. So many injustices are committed in religions' name. Paul Callus June 22, 2014 at 4:45 AM Thank you Andrea! Your awesome comment encourages no end!! cu // paul

Arthur Vaso June 19, 2014 at 10:47 PM Loved the message in this Paul, However I have met quite a few along my path acting just like that, and nothing to do with religion, selfishness and greed, seems to know no boundaries Great write!!. Paul Callus June 22, 2014 at 4:58 AM Yes, Arthur...had I to include all intolerable things the list would be endless! // Txs for stopping by. // paul

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 3:08 PM Paul, that's my nature out here, and where ever I go.. I offer, love, smiles, and support... when I can, or am allowed too...Linda Paul Callus June 20, 2014 at 10:24 AM Ohhhh! love, smiles and support are always welcome!:)) you can visit any time....paul (now...control that trigger-happy finger...no need to click back!!)

Poet Destroyer A June 18, 2014 at 3:01 PM Hello Paul, WOW! Well expressed, to those who are unbearable, I aim to expose right by your side... Well done, wishing you luck...Linda Paul Callus June 18, 2014 at 4:31 PM Hi Linda...thanks for the visit and for offering your support!! This is my last post for tonight....eyes half closed. Take care. // paul

Len Gasun June 18, 2014 at 11:48 AM Another wowser my dear friend Paul. I enjoyed thoroughly reading this stellar rhyme of yours. Kudos my dear friend and thank you so much for sharing! No wonder it won ( I saw comments below). My hearty congratulations my dear friend. Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora Paul Callus June 18, 2014 at 2:49 PM Wow! I love your comments dear Leonora! You are as kind as ever:) Thank you ever so much. hugs // paul

Jan Allison June 18, 2014 at 2:18 AM Just popping by to congratulate you Paul i knew it would be a winner! Hugs Jan xxxx Paul Callus June 18, 2014 at 2:38 PM Thank you Jan; so kind of you to stop by again with your comments and wishes! hugs // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta June 17, 2014 at 11:11 PM Congratulations on a fine win in the contest on Tolerance, Paul Paul Callus June 18, 2014 at 2:16 PM Thank you Dr. Ram. Your entry was short yet excellent. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire June 17, 2014 at 5:36 PM Dear Paul, There seem to be a lot of phony people of ill intent identified in your poem. Perhaps if we all work on exposing them, we can make a difference. For me, the worst hurt comes from those who pretend to be friends. The "Et tu, Brute" line always comes to mind. Excellent poem on things we should not tolerate! Love, carolyn Paul Callus June 18, 2014 at 1:27 PM Hi Carolyn...On a personal level I also agree with "Et tu, Brute"; I experienced it! The other 'intolerable' ones are all around us and can cause much misery. Thank you for visiting and for your comments. Love and Peace. // paul

Lucilla Carrillo June 17, 2014 at 3:59 PM WOW! Paul you hit the nail on the dot with this one. I have at least once met up with all this kind of people. Sometimes you can not avoid them. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Paul Callus June 17, 2014 at 4:52 PM Thank you Lucilla. So glad you liked my 'intolerable' write! As always, I appreciate your stopping by. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 17, 2014 at 2:00 PM CONGRATULATIONS PAUL!!! gosh (Sir) Freddie amazes me each time he picks his winners.. !!!! as I too don't know how to deal with the contest.. :D?! ill go for lil walk Paul am feeling sad... :( cu later. Paul Callus June 17, 2014 at 4:55 PM Thank you Olive_eloi:) I know how hard it is to choose winners in any type of contest. Judges have a hard job. Hope the walk made you feel better :) // paul

Leon Enriquez June 16, 2014 at 9:05 PM Dear Paul: Such a fiery outpouring. Simply marvelous. Leon Paul Callus June 17, 2014 at 10:25 AM Ah! Leon...so nice to have you visiting. Thank you for the strong comments....most welcome! // paul

Casarah Nance June 16, 2014 at 6:48 PM Wow so strong in your beliefs and many many will agree there is too much of the negative that shouldn't be in this world, Well said, good luck in the contest Paul Callus June 17, 2014 at 10:29 AM You are correct, Casarah. There is a lot of good going on around us, but we tend to focus more on the negative...the media contributes its share, too. Thanks for stopping by and for the wishes. // paul

Tim Smith June 16, 2014 at 6:02 PM Your face is quite handsome Paul..Your gentle soul shines through it...I totally agree with you on all the pretender....Tim Paul Callus June 17, 2014 at 10:04 AM Thank you for the compliment and the lovely comments, Tim! Old age looks have their advantages:) Cu my friend. // paul

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