Into the Wild

Winter has come
water banks freeze
colorful sun
drift away please.
smoke forest calm
not a sound made
frost covered palms
snowy mountain fog fades.

Little marshmallow snow drops
arrive and fall, come with me we'ell ascend
through the cocoa plants stunned crops
the coldness, old mighty nature please befriend.
golden spiral artwork of nature
within the deep land lies the bitter
like the summit, so major
always frozen the sun shines, ice glitters.

Hush now follow me
into the wild devoid of humans
seize my hand leave reality lets flee
be my crewman.
we can now sail our ship
can't forget your thinking hat
let your mind unzip, 
but i'l tell you now, we may never make it back.
sorry, that's how nature just is.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 18, 2016 at 12:32 PM
DARAGH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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February 14, 2013 at 2:45 AM
To me this poem is multi dimensional, a bit like the artist Escher's artwork. Fascinating and very original with a perfect title! Amazing work Daragh.
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