Teddy Kimathi Poet Rhyme

Into the Sunlight

It is the divine time again,
where my eyes gain
an opportunity to see the sky
fiery, as though the sun
has poured its energy 
on the stars, causing a fiery
reaction that is beautiful, and doesn't burn......



Date:06/06/2014

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Carolyn Devonshire May 17, 2014 at 2:19 PM Hi Teddy, Such a unique perspective you have here. As children, we are always told not to stare into the sun. When it's setting, though, it's hard to turn away. Beautifully composed. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn Teddy Kimathi May 19, 2014 at 3:59 AM Thanks for your applause Carolyne! You remind me of sweet childhood days! ^_^

Faye Gibson May 16, 2014 at 3:41 PM Beautiful! Congratulations, Teddy. Teddy Kimathi May 17, 2014 at 5:37 AM I appreciate you praise Faye! Thank you very much! ^_^

Barbara Gorelick May 16, 2014 at 9:06 AM Neat! Congrats on your win Teddy. BG Teddy Kimathi May 17, 2014 at 5:35 AM Thank you so much Barbara! ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 16, 2014 at 5:32 AM Sweet write Teddy n congrats on merited great win ! Teddy Kimathi May 17, 2014 at 5:34 AM Thank you very much for your kind words and applause Dr. Upma! ^_^

Shadow Hamilton May 16, 2014 at 4:34 AM Teddy lovely poem ty for your support congrats on win hugs Teddy Kimathi May 16, 2014 at 5:05 AM Thank you very much Shadow Hamilton! You are a great source of morale support too! <3 <3 ^_^