Into the Sunlight

Aspires buoyancy,
            
                                  Morning sun peaks to brilliance,

                                         Woes forego , sunsets !!








Haiku - 5/7/5
Written on 10/5/14
Sponsor- Shadow Hamilton
Contest - Into the Sunset
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Dr. Upma So meaningful and truthful. You said a lot with so few words. Thank you for the nice comment on my Fun Secret poem
Kaur Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 5:34 AM
Commendable!
Onclaud Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:33 AM
so expressive and lovely in tone, dr. upma... huge congrats.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 8:15 PM
As it rises, the sun sure does lift our spirits with it. I enjoyed your winning poem, Dr. Upma! Congratulations to you!
Devonshire Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Dear Dr. Upma, What an amazing haiku. You have quite a talent for this form. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Congrats for your win, sweetie!
Guzzi Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Hi my new friend I saw on Andie haiku you seemed not to know what I wanted in a haiku - here isa good easy 10 step source on how to write haiku http://www.graceguts.com/essays/haiku-checklist Light & Love
Gibson Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Beautiful...amazing how you can say so much with so few words. Congratulations!
Gorelick Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 8:54 AM
I like how your mind works..congrats. BG
Parker Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations Dr Upma for your well deserved win
Hamilton Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 4:28 AM
Dr Upma love this poem ty for your support congrats on win hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Love the middle line on this one. I love when the sun is high in the sky like that. I had to chuckle at your comment on the winners list. Sorry about that. but you sure have a good humor about it.
A. Sharma Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Thanks for ur valuable much appreciated comments always dear //upma//
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