Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Sonnet

Into the Sunlight

Glorious brace glow from beams of shine
Yellow orange peeps streaming strip lines
Darkness disbands eaten by the sunset
Conjuring baby blossoms to life's sweat
Graciously drowning beating the twilight
Waving hope to a spick-and-span fright

My shining star, healing my aged scars
Into the sunlight, my knight on sight
New dreams burst jar, allowing spar
Top of the world, I find and whirled
Into the sunlight, spirits wake sprite
White no more tars, breaking all bars

Glorious brace glow from beams of shine
My shining star, healing my aged scars

(c) Olive ELoisa
May 09, 2014
2:53pm

Contest Name:	Into the Sunset 
Sponsor:	Shadow Hamilton
8th place, Praise God! :)

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Nette Onclaud May 19, 2014 at 9:42 AM yes!.. you're on a roll, olive.. huge congrats.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 5:25 AM thanks much Nette.. :) really appreciate you drop by.. :D

Carolyn Devonshire May 17, 2014 at 2:25 PM Ah, Olive, if only a new car could heal aged scars, we'd be young forever. What a beautiful sonnet! Congratulations on your win! Carolyn Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 18, 2014 at 2:38 AM Thanks very much Carolyn..:) our hearts can forever be young..:)

Ivor Kos May 16, 2014 at 8:00 PM As Paul said: "And back again....weeeee!!! Congratulations:)))" Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 18, 2014 at 2:45 AM Thanks much Ivo :)

Paul Callus May 16, 2014 at 12:20 PM And back again....weeeee!!! Congratulations:))) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 18, 2014 at 2:45 AM Thanks Paul :) GBu

Shadow Hamilton May 16, 2014 at 4:39 AM Olive an enchanting poem ty for your support congrats on win hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 18, 2014 at 2:38 AM Thanks very much Shadow for giving me a place :) GBU

Stephan McBride May 15, 2014 at 4:30 AM awesome write, love it Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 6:21 AM thanks much.. :)

Saba Khan May 12, 2014 at 12:08 AM Good :) :) :) :) :) :) Wishes-Saba! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 12, 2014 at 7:28 AM thanks much SAba >>:)

Paul Callus May 9, 2014 at 4:37 PM Praise to you wonder girl! This is so beautiful. You keep raising the bar up. Olive_eloi enjoying the sunlight:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 4:50 PM Thanks much Paul..:) GBU and hugs..:) weeeee your much appreciated..:)

Aiyah Torres May 9, 2014 at 12:24 PM You left me speechless after reading this poem... This is awe to the highest level..!!! wonderful write as always..:O)) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 4:51 PM Thanks much Aiyah.. Happy to see you stop by.. GBU sweets..:)

Casarah Nance May 9, 2014 at 10:59 AM Beautiful writing beautiful girl. Your words are magical. Well done and good luck :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 4:52 PM Thank you Casarah.. Your more beautiful than this one..:)