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Into the Sea

I watched you from the shore as you walked into the inky black sea the moonlight illuminating the shape of you. I listened to the sound of the waves as they rolled gently onto the shore then there was only silence. And in the morning I watched the sunrise over the horizon saw the vast emptiness- And knew that you had left.

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Date: 1/22/2020 7:03:00 AM
What an imagery dearest, Julie! One day when least expected the emptiness would disappear and love would feel the void! Beautifully written! Hugs xxx
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Julie Achilles
Date: 1/23/2020 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, hugs, Julie xx

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