Jeanne Mcgee Poet Rhyme

Into the Night

Walk the beach
Gulls beseech

Westward breeze
Warm to please

Waves roll in
Mermaids grin

Romance one
Setting sun

Colors glow
Quite a show

Stars alight
Special sight

Sweet faced moons
Venus swoons

Candle glow
Hours go

Time for bed
Sleepy head



9-13-2020
Threes, Please Poetry Contest

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Nette Onclaud September 16, 2020 at 2:41 PM you charm me with this mellow threes, jeanne... great poetic mood!...huggs Jeanne Mcgee September 18, 2020 at 8:44 PM Hi Nette, many thanks indeed. xoxo :D

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2020 at 3:28 PM Precious penning, Jeanne. I really like this. Your avatar resembles my sister Dori a bit! Jeanne Mcgee September 16, 2020 at 4:26 PM Tell your sister hello... Is she a poet or artist too?

Gershon Wolf September 14, 2020 at 7:54 PM Oh, this is really so pleasant and pleasing. I am going to hit the pillow with a smile on my face and this poem in my heart. Love it, Jeanne! Magic and Moonlight, Gershon Jeanne Mcgee September 14, 2020 at 8:13 PM Off to bed, sleepy head! It was a nice change from an earlier poem...and a lovely evening when I wrote it.

Lindsay Laurie September 14, 2020 at 6:26 PM Hello Jeanne … says a lot in so few words that I can a balmy night with setting sun - well done Jeanne - Lindsay Jeanne Mcgee September 14, 2020 at 8:12 PM Hola Lindsay...just what I am enjoying these days...thank you.

Sigrid Ermine September 14, 2020 at 3:28 AM Hello, Jeanne. A really impressive 'threes'! You built an atmosphere in it, 'beseech' is a bit more sophisticated than what is expected in three syllables. 'Sweet faced moons' is also a nice chunky three, says a lot. Top marks for Beth's contest. Jeanne Mcgee September 14, 2020 at 4:27 AM that is most kind of you to express and many thanks! Jeanne

Mahtab Bangalee September 13, 2020 at 11:12 PM beautiful rhyming... it's pleasure to read Jeanne Mcgee September 14, 2020 at 4:28 AM Hello and thank you for the pleasure. :D