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Into the Night

Walk the beach Gulls beseech Westward breeze Warm to please Waves roll in Mermaids grin Romance one Setting sun Colors glow Quite a show Stars alight Special sight Sweet faced moons Venus swoons Candle glow Hours go Time for bed Sleepy head 9-13-2020 Threes, Please Poetry Contest

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2020 2:41:00 PM

you charm me with this mellow threes, jeanne... great poetic mood!...huggs

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/18/2020 8:44:00 PM

Hi Nette, many thanks indeed. xoxo :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2020 3:28:00 PM

Precious penning, Jeanne. I really like this. Your avatar resembles my sister Dori a bit!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/16/2020 4:26:00 PM

Tell your sister hello... Is she a poet or artist too?

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/14/2020 7:54:00 PM

Oh, this is really so pleasant and pleasing. I am going to hit the pillow with a smile on my face and this poem in my heart. Love it, Jeanne! Magic and Moonlight, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/14/2020 8:13:00 PM

Off to bed, sleepy head! It was a nice change from an earlier poem...and a lovely evening when I wrote it.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/14/2020 6:26:00 PM

Hello Jeanne … says a lot in so few words that I can a balmy night with setting sun - well done Jeanne - Lindsay

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/14/2020 8:12:00 PM

Hola Lindsay...just what I am enjoying these days...thank you.

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/14/2020 3:28:00 AM

Hello, Jeanne. A really impressive 'threes'! You built an atmosphere in it, 'beseech' is a bit more sophisticated than what is expected in three syllables. 'Sweet faced moons' is also a nice chunky three, says a lot. Top marks for Beth's contest.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/14/2020 4:27:00 AM

that is most kind of you to express and many thanks! Jeanne

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/13/2020 11:12:00 PM

beautiful rhyming... it's pleasure to read

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/14/2020 4:28:00 AM

Hello and thank you for the pleasure. :D