Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Free verse

Into the Mist

Wherever I am, the world comes after me,
It believes not that I am but 
a transient traveler through the mist of time,
For all its worth I may one day 
drop the world like a weary Atlas
and forever disappear into the great beyond.



~Abdul Malik, 07/25/2015
~Line#1-Mary Oliver
~Add 5 lines contest by nette onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2015 at 8:38 PM love it love it love it. You are a wonder, Abdul. Congrats. Abdul Malik Mandani August 6, 2015 at 9:52 AM love it love it love it--I mean your comment! Thanks Andrea

Nette Onclaud August 5, 2015 at 12:58 AM a rare, mellow work that ends up with a great win.. congrats and thanks for joining my contest,abdul! Abdul Malik Mandani August 5, 2015 at 11:04 AM Thanks nette, I am mellowing too!

Laura Leiser August 4, 2015 at 12:36 PM Congrats on your win, Abdul! I really loved this one, a 7 from me :) Abdul Malik Mandani August 4, 2015 at 12:48 PM Thanks Laura. I had actually written 2 poems for this contest. I entered this, but looking back, I think the other one was better. Well, thanks for your comments.

Tammy Reams August 4, 2015 at 8:38 AM Congrats on your win Abdul! A wonderful write! Abdul Malik Mandani August 4, 2015 at 12:47 PM Thanks Tammy.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2015 at 12:48 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write abdul! Wonderful imagery! Abdul Malik Mandani August 4, 2015 at 12:49 PM Thanks Upma. Appreciate much.

Skat A August 4, 2015 at 12:42 AM Abdul, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Eve Roper August 3, 2015 at 9:21 PM Abdul, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve Abdul Malik Mandani August 4, 2015 at 12:46 PM Thanks Eve. Appreciate your comments.

Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 4:39 PM Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx Abdul Malik Mandani August 4, 2015 at 12:49 PM Thanks Jan.

Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 6:14 PM wonderful imagery Abdul - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx