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Into the Maelstrom

The darkness within the heart, The flaws of human nature, The negativity from superiority, The imbalance of rights and privileges, The repercussions of unjust acts, The soul is drawn into the maelstrom. April 13, 2025.

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Ink Empress

Date: 4/13/2025 2:17:00 AM

A very profound and soulfully meaningful poem this is dear Emate; I especially felt "The repercussions of unjust acts, The soul is drawn into the maelstrom." Couldnt have said it any better, your way with words and the depth within these lines really stood out for me! Pleasure reading Sending you light always

Thompson Emate
Date: 4/13/2025 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Ink for stopping by. I'm honoured.