Into the Blue

blue skies long boats
trees withstanding wheels with ropes
standing there watching with hope
that it doesnt choke
as it dangles around its neck like a jacket on a cloak
jump in the blue sea and float
my freinds atoms and isotopes
give me the antidote as bubbles rise to make h20
water are you my freind or my foe
as im deep under i flap my hands up up and away i go....
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Agustin Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 12:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Khalid, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
Muideen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:45 PM
I love this beautiful piece of yours. Excellence......A.M.
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Creative expressions nicely penned, khalid
Brown Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 4:17 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Khalid. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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July 14, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site and its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this gem with luv..
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