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Into the Blue

blue skies long boats trees withstanding wheels with ropes standing there watching with hope that it doesnt choke as it dangles around its neck like a jacket on a cloak jump in the blue sea and float my freinds atoms and isotopes give me the antidote as bubbles rise to make h20 water are you my freind or my foe as im deep under i flap my hands up up and away i go....

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Date: 1/25/2016 3:19:00 PM
Khalid, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/28/2015 7:45:00 PM
I love this beautiful piece of yours. Excellence......A.M.
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:33:00 PM
Creative expressions nicely penned, khalid
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Date: 7/15/2011 4:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Khalid. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2011 11:51:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site and its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this gem with luv..
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