Into the Autumn Woods

sparkling trees
snowfall captures bootprints--
fawn with mama runs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 10:52 PM
lovely, congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this gorgeous image >> James
Horsman Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 12:15 AM
I love the middle line here, Deb so much imagery, awesome. congrats on win. Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Congrats Deb on your win in Andrea's contest with this elegant piece my friend.. enjoy another victory dance today with luv...
Devonshire Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your win with this great haiku, Deb! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Excellent haiku Deb! Super congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest ;)
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Great one..Congratulations on your win..Sara
K. Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 11:14 AM
I really liked this Deb, - and how cool is that that you used "bootprints"! Wonderful haiku and super congrats on your 2nd place win-- so honored to be with you! -- nikko :)
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations Deb on your 2nt place. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Deb
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 4:28 AM
oh, wow, Deb, I almost gave this a first place. An awesome haiku writing. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 10:15 AM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Deb. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 7:34 PM
Adorable, Deb. Like the way you called their hoofprints "bootprints." Makes it sound like they're prepared for the snow. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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September 28, 2010 at 2:48 PM
A beautiful Haiku, each line sends a new story...love it Deb. luv Michael
Neels Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 1:54 PM
Deb, I love the second line of your haiku! Stunning write ;) Wilma
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Nice observation on the activities of fawn with mama, Deb
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