Notes About The Poem

- Into Space -

Drop social realism and political disagreements

                          Build a spaceship with modern technology

                    You will find many functional materials in the kitchen

                                       - a journey into space

                            Where robots serve coffee and chocolate

                            You in the cockpit with your best friend

                                 and with highly skilled employees

                                             - beyond the stars

                           If your experiments were to ends in disaster

                            and your expectations are reduced to zero

                                                  Do not panic

                           Follow the Milky Way and you will find home

                                    - never forget to look at the stars

                            The irrational and the improbable seem true

                             if we are given the opportunity to believe it 







                                                  12/02/2021
                                          Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Crabtree Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 3:15 PM
I love this, Anne-Lise. I'm always telling my husband that I can't wait to get back to my home planet (out there) ;)
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 1:54 AM
- Thank you very much, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 4:35 PM
This is fun. To Infinity and beyond. Hugs Rick.
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:15 AM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 5:52 AM
A writing as deep as the space itself, dearest Anne-Lise! Happy Valentines my friend. Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:15 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 2:40 AM
Wonderful write... so dreamy. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:15 AM
- Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 12:29 AM
An intelligent write dear Ann... I went through an imaginative ride as I read this... following the milky way, looking at the stars...am faving this... Love n hugs.. ~ Ani
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:14 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and fave, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 5:36 PM
Very creative and descriptive, Anne-Lise. Janice
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:13 AM
- Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brul Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Very evocative piece Anne-Lise..Keep them coming..Blessings..
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:13 AM
- Thank you very much, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 4:00 AM
Beautiful poem Anne Lise. I read somewhere that millions miles away such a planet as ours exist. ~~
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:12 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 2:49 PM
Excelllent. As I read I could see two young space explorers building their space ship preparing to go where no man has gone before. Really good imagery for the imagination to buid on here. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:12 AM
- Thank you very much, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 2:38 PM
your imagination is amazing Anne-lise thanks for a wonderful journey:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:11 AM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 2:03 PM
That would be quite an adventure. Your creativity always goes beyond the ordinary. Kudos for your imagination, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 2:16 PM
- We must never forget to "play" a little ... the imagination is a good tool, thank you very much Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 12:45 PM
I love the journey you’ve invited me to join, Anne-Lise! I enjoyed the ride very much...
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 12:54 PM
- So glad you enjoyed it, Ilene :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 11:33 AM
We can still look into space and dream!
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 11:48 AM
... yes ... and use our imagination :) - Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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