Into Nightscape

High above, the storm grows bizarre O maddened sea , rattling the mast; My fate near water’s edge, aghast A life shuffling as night is cast All dim except one single star. Through smog, a fair siren appears Long the tresses, eyes made of green, Rising to meet tempest’s bloodstream In her lash, a shipwreck redeemed; Calming my fright among hazed tears. Ahead I lay on shoreline’s eaves The buoyant glide of milder waves, Softens with the nymph's hushed octaves That even rough typhoon behaves; As she coasts along, then leaves. I wake to feel a heady scent Lips tasting salt of restful night, Upon dreamscape, snapshots delight Till misty air grabs fancy’s flight; Yet, her mystique leaves me incensed. Contest: Your Best Poem #2 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Envelope Quintet Form Rhyme Scheme: a.b.b.b.a 5/5/2013

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Date: 7/27/2015 7:11:00 AM
Beautiful as always Nette. Congratulations! hugs!
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:15:00 AM
Exquisite write dear nette! Congrats on ur winning work!
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:02:00 PM
very captivating pen Nette congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:28:00 PM
NETTE, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:08:00 PM
Such amazing imagery Nette and I love the form you chose - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 5/26/2013 6:50:00 PM
beautiful and captivating with imagery with superb, concise poetic talent, as usual. Saw this on the Top 100 Recent list. :)
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Date: 5/12/2013 9:48:00 AM
Hi, my very dear friend Nette! I'm now in Bangkok. I'm so sorry, I just came now to say Hi to you and to congratulate you on your super win 'coz I went to the church to attend multiple & big events (almost whole day). MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SUPER WIN (& other wins) AND YOUR OUTSTANDING WRITE with Big hugs from me! I'll come back tomorrow afternoon! Take care & God bless! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/11/2013 4:55:00 PM
Nette an intriguing dream.Congratulations on your well deserved dream. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/11/2013 3:17:00 AM
'A maddened sea, 'hazed tears' and 'milder waves' - oh my...
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Date: 5/11/2013 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations nette. 'Till misty air grabs fancy’s flight' .....such a beautiful line that seems the essence of dreams. SuZ
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Date: 5/11/2013 12:50:00 AM
Nette i so enjoyed this,you are so talented ...Seren
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Date: 5/5/2013 10:16:00 AM
So beautifully penned dream poem by you nette!!Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 5/5/2013 6:44:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed reading this morn..I believe that this is the best one that you have written in long while..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:48:00 AM
The mystery and reality of emotions after a deep dream ..... This is really a good poem Nette - You will be the winner of this contest - I believe that for sure. - Wishing you a lovely Sunday! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:19:00 AM
Sounds like a winner to me Nette.Too many great lines to pick just one !!Anne
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