Into My Arms

"Each experience is locked within my heart and only I hold the key..."

I  waited  patiently for  so long
Uncertainties and  excitement
Each day  growing  together
Then our special day came
Brought into the world
Into my arms
My new love
My child
Born




Written by Shani Fassbender
For Constance La France's Contest "A Fragment of Life"
Date: August 22, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/28/2011 1:25:00 AM
I think for most people, this has to be way up there for most memorable moments. Congrats on your win, sweetie.
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:17:00 PM
What a wonderful feeling isn't it. Great write. Lee
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Date: 8/26/2011 5:31:00 PM
just lovely..and I hope you have your child read it too! Light & Love
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:02:00 PM
Many congrats to you, Shani : )
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:55:00 PM
Well done. I enjoyed your entry. Tony
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:43:00 PM
Beautiful sentiment. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Shani. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:21:00 PM
shani...sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:19:00 PM
Wonderful work..Congrats on your win in this great contest..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:09:00 AM
Congrats Shani on your exciting win with this excellent expression in poetry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations Shani
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:59:00 AM
hey Shani congrats on your win, short and very sweet, David
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