Into Coma Started Sinking and More

Into Coma Started Sinking

Try to write awful Poem  was thinking,
Until both of my eyes started blinking;
Both hands folded,
And was scolded;
Into another coma had started sinking.

Jim Horn

Am over 10 again. How sad. More 
copy and pasting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Downing  Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Oh I know you have plenty more up your sleeve, so keep me coming...
Horn Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Check out my one about Canada for Ellison. Maybe like Trump and Macron may become like a macaroon cookie you maroon in a cacoon. Make a poem out of that.
Horn Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Check out my one about Canada for Ellison. Maybe like Trump and Macron may become like a macaroon cookie you maroon in a cacoon. Make a poem out of that.
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