William Kelii Kekaula Poet Choka

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Poetic Form: Choka
Inspired: 2024 May 28
Image: Jamaican Water Soup

int'l poetry soup kitchens

what no utensils
we've hands ~ soup kitchen water
main in-gr[id-i-ot]
French Consommé soup
beef stock veal broth ~ no substance
comes with twelve-course meal
Miso water soup
nine nine point nine ~ still nothing
we've extra chopsticks
Jamaican Mannish
Water goat soup ~ keyword big
voluminously

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Sara Kendrick May 31, 2024 at 7:43 AM Way to go. With all the mixture there would bound to be a note of flavor that most anyone would like. Keep on writing. Sara K William Kelii Kekaula May 31, 2024 at 8:20 AM Sara, I am pleased with your sharing visit, and same here, keep on, Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith May 28, 2024 at 1:19 PM I enjoyed reading your fun write. Are you are cooking???  Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.......... William Kelii Kekaula May 28, 2024 at 2:35 PM A Soupy Sales-lathon of day, Paula, blessings too. Aloha, William