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Intimations

We are left clues everywhere-- the purring of the Eternal made by a boundless ocean as it laps the shore, the winds as they kiss your cheeks and lift the game heart, the sun's soft touch on open flesh, its breath warming and pulling us up, outward to blue sky...

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 6/14/2020 6:14:00 AM

Delightfully communicative in its simplicity. A welcome uplifting message in times of strife. Nice one, Len.

L. J. Carber
Date: 6/14/2020 12:04:00 PM

Thank you, Geoff--I hope you and yours are well in these fraught times--y vaya con Dios todos los anos, mi amigo!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/9/2020 5:30:00 PM

Wonderfully written, LJ., we have pieces to the puzzle and one day we'll see the full picture! Blessings, Rhonda xx

L. J. Carber
Date: 6/10/2020 11:24:00 AM

Thank you for your most kind words--God willing, we seekers will be fully awakened then!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/7/2020 7:00:00 PM

Yes the clues are everywhere--nicely done, L. J.

L. J. Carber
Date: 6/9/2020 11:00:00 AM

Ah true, Vijay, but it seems the best of us only pick up on a few--more and more I feel we are all asleep....go with God!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2020 10:57:00 AM

Amen! Only our Lord knows it depth and breadth of our universe. Well said

L. J. Carber
Date: 6/9/2020 11:00:00 AM

Yet Eve, we humans have such hubris in our science and technology--and politics! God bless!