L. J. Carber Poet Blank verse

Intimations

We are left clues everywhere--
the purring of the Eternal
made by a boundless ocean
as it laps the shore,
the winds as they kiss
your cheeks and lift
the game heart, the sun's
soft touch on open flesh,
its breath warming and pulling
us up, outward to blue sky...

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Geoffrey Brewer June 14, 2020 at 6:14 AM Delightfully communicative in its simplicity. A welcome uplifting message in times of strife. Nice one, Len. L. J. Carber June 14, 2020 at 12:04 PM Thank you, Geoff--I hope you and yours are well in these fraught times--y vaya con Dios todos los anos, mi amigo!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 9, 2020 at 5:30 PM Wonderfully written, LJ., we have pieces to the puzzle and one day we'll see the full picture! Blessings, Rhonda xx L. J. Carber June 10, 2020 at 11:24 AM Thank you for your most kind words--God willing, we seekers will be fully awakened then!

Vijay Pandit June 7, 2020 at 7:00 PM Yes the clues are everywhere--nicely done, L. J. L. J. Carber June 9, 2020 at 11:00 AM Ah true, Vijay, but it seems the best of us only pick up on a few--more and more I feel we are all asleep....go with God!

Eve Roper June 7, 2020 at 10:57 AM Amen! Only our Lord knows it depth and breadth of our universe. Well said L. J. Carber June 9, 2020 at 11:00 AM Yet Eve, we humans have such hubris in our science and technology--and politics! God bless!