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Love is amorphous; it defies description. Love is not an idea; it doesn't fit an ascription Love fills our lives, the minute we are born. As old moon fades and the new wraps her horn. In your embraces, I have found refuge. In the turbulent years before the deluge To convince me, it only takes that one look. That implies you're always near a fairy book. As everything stops, your eyes speak to me. My void was filled by love, and I feel full glee. Your gaze tells me you'll adore me every day. Whatever unfolds, you'll be there to see it by. Sure enough, I've done some stuff in the past. That feels so awful, even if my motives are cast Experiencing them is an unbearable anguish. Such a fate sets me that I exult as I languish. You can't flee self; there's no place to hide. It hurts deeply, it burns your soul and pride. I cry, wishing you to kiss away my fears. If you knew, I miss you to wipe my tears. I know I can't run from myself or my fear. And I know at such times I don't seem near. What I feel for you is like blood in my veins. That I dream of you despite all of the pain. 1st place contest winner Written: April 30, 2023 Pick-A-Title, Vol 36 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/23/2023 10:40:00 AM
Lassad, this lovely poem shares an intimacy with those of us who are enchanted by the delicacy of your words and your love. Congratulations on your win with this poem of intricate images and soulful expressions! Blessings!
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Date: 5/21/2023 4:28:00 AM
Beautiful. Like a gentle kiss to the soul. God bless you and Congratulations on your top win. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/20/2023 6:54:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant poem, Lasaad:-) I loved it!
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Date: 5/10/2023 10:48:00 AM
Very intimate Sotto Sir, Well done.
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Date: 5/1/2023 2:17:00 PM
wonderful message, i hope it is true, touching and beautiful penning thanks
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Date: 5/1/2023 6:50:00 AM
One thing is certain in life and that is we are born and one day all of us will die. But that is another era, an afterlife which will be disclosed after we die. An excellent poem Lasaad my friend, as always. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 4/30/2023 8:43:00 PM
Indeed, love is the all pervading essence of God consciousness ~ beautiful poem, SP. Love the quote too
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Date: 4/30/2023 5:24:00 PM
Amazing poem of the ultimate truth, love it
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