Intervals

Intervals Time lapsing repeating a breathing space respite from preceding activity. An interlude that accentuates breaks and goings on preceding silent gaps. Thus, rending beautiful flowing music enlivening auditory delight. Giving patrons harmonious pleasure, happiness born through music or words paused. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 16, 2010 Poetic form: Quadruple Tetractys

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 1/16/2010 11:45:00 AM

Dane Ann~Wow words that dance delight! Love the form to! Great write! Laura :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/16/2010 9:52:00 AM

Wow x four!! You are on a roll this morning writing poetry!! Well done! Thank you so much Dane Ann, it is nice to see a comment on an older poem, ...sometimes the older ones are lost and left behind! Thanks again! Love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2010 7:35:00 AM

Interesting topic for this Tetractys. Nicely done and yes sometimes we need interludes to enjoy the music,etc. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poems. The one about the "Living Waters" was inspired by Daystar. The other about the Prickly Pear Cactus was cacti that I saw in someone else's yard. I have not made the jelly or tasted the jelly even though I have seen it forsale in places like tourist stops along the road. Sara