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Intertwined

love and life both are intertwined with you and i both alive and staying behind to watch the sun as it is about to raise one of the beautiful things i see daily but your make seem like the sun is nothing just an object it the sky floating for no reason why you give me light and day and the night is when you leave my sight i dont see anything not even a speck of light just the emptiness in the air with the darkness here i dont get why my heart fly's when you arrive it sings and doesn't cry only cry's for joy and happiness when you leave it dies of sadness dont understand how you control my day i wonder if i do the same to you and your day well she is just amazing as i said again love and life are intertwined my life and your love make me go on for hours beyond

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Date: 8/9/2013 3:58:00 AM
Hey sweetie! Read this one on FB...So so beautiful. I'm so proud of you, Dylan! :) Auntie is so proud. Listen, why don't you take a few minutes to write words of thanks back to the people who post. It will help you make friends...Charmaine is a sweetie and she actually asked me your name so she could check up on ya. Just a suggestion! Hugs...can't wait till you guys are back! Shereen is here for a month...Get on back here!
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 8/29/2013 11:39:00 AM
Auntie you are right and i did soo thank you for helping me
Date: 8/9/2013 3:48:00 AM
Another beautiful poem rising like a sunrise and fading as a sparkling sunset
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 8/29/2013 11:38:00 AM
yea i guess but i still need practice

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