Intertwined

love and life
both are intertwined
with you and i
both alive
and staying behind
to watch the sun
as it is about to raise
one of the beautiful things
i see daily
but your make seem
like the sun is nothing
just an object it the sky
floating for no reason why
you give me light and day
and the night
is when you leave my sight
i dont see anything
not even a speck of light
just the emptiness in the air
with the darkness here
i dont get why
my heart fly's
when you arrive
it sings and doesn't cry
only cry's for joy and happiness
when you leave it dies of sadness
dont understand how
you control my day
i wonder if i do the same
to you and your day
well she is just amazing
as i said again
love and life
are intertwined
my life
and your love
make me go on
for hours beyond
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Manassian Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 3:58 AM
Hey sweetie! Read this one on FB...So so beautiful. I'm so proud of you, Dylan! :) Auntie is so proud. Listen, why don't you take a few minutes to write words of thanks back to the people who post. It will help you make friends...Charmaine is a sweetie and she actually asked me your name so she could check up on ya. Just a suggestion! Hugs...can't wait till you guys are back! Shereen is here for a month...Get on back here!
Manassian Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 11:39 AM
Auntie you are right and i did soo thank you for helping me
Chircop Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 3:48 AM
Another beautiful poem rising like a sunrise and fading as a sparkling sunset
Manassian Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 11:38 AM
yea i guess but i still need practice
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