Intertwined

Hearts race,crazy fast
Hold me close
don't let go.

Intertwined

Together is good
seperated we fall. 
Don't ever leave 
me.

Intertwined

Together forever
that is us. Never apart
deep love burns deep

We are forever INTERTWINED!

~Ily-This is for the one person i truly love and would be devastated if anything ever 
happened to him. I just hoped he would feel the same, so sorry this is not how I actually am 
this is how I wish we were and stay this way. Love you forever...And always will!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Montgomery Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Aww this is really really sweet :)
Brown Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 8:48 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Brittany. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol
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