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INTERSECTION

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at the edge of a black hole's sigh, where light surrenders its final arc, a clock melts into liquid shadow. seconds stretch like taffy— thin, translucent, tasting of iron and forgotten supernovas. The universe holds its breath.
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Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 9:21 PM
Very cool ~ surreal Adding to my FAVE's
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:37 PM
thank you for your comments and the fave! humbly grateful, Sara
Demotte Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 6:12 PM
I love the poetic imagery of this..."at the edge of a black hole's sigh" is such a wonderful line!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:38 PM
thanks for visiting and for your positive comments....grateful
Hind Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 11:34 AM
"Universe holding its breath" sums it pretty much up...where time stalls, blackholes. I enjoyed reading :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:38 PM
thank you.....delighted you enjoyed the poem, hugs, Sara
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