Interruption of Solitude

INTERRUPTION OF SOLITUDE

                                Cloud caressed rock face
                                Cycles of ice hide from wicked wind-- cling
                                Without your consent

                                Interlopers
                                Uninvited frigid fingers
                                Disturbing peace 

V Anderson Throop Nov 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 9:26:00 AM

Victoria, wow... very deep...PD

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 12/21/2013 10:20:00 PM

thanks as always for your reading and comments. now that i again have wifi at home, i will be a more considerate reader! Vic

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 12/2/2013 4:11:00 PM

John, thanks....I was looking at a beautiful misty mountain---suddenly the north wind blew in from the sea--the mist was gone, and the mountain was covered in ice cycles. It happened so quickly that I was amazed that the beauty could change so quickly--also the 'tone' of the beauty, went from the serenity of the mist, to the wild ice storm--all happened within minutes! (And I usually love the ice cycles, but at this moment they were interlopers!)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/26/2013 10:22:00 PM

Love this Haiku. The best one I've read in a long time. Not sure of your intended meaning. I first saw icicles as the interlopers. The uninvited frigid fingers that cling without consent. But then I thought it could be Old man winter's frigid boney fingers, uninvited, touching everything and disturbing the peace. Either way it is an excellent write.

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 12/2/2013 4:14:00 PM

see my reply above (I hit the wrong key!)